[[Sakuragi_Luka]]

Мозговой шторм продолжается :3 Утром Понта-сан сказал, раз я такая быстрая и закончила с переводами, теперь должна написать свое мнение об этом месте на английском. Oh, God, why?

Вот любые переводы, только не писать свое мнение на английском =/ Я его уже так неплохо забыла и косячу сильно с ошибками. Поэтому, если можете, проверьте мой текст, пожалуйста : D

Час настроя, два часа мучений и под конец я даже расписалась. Spirit Inspiration ко мне вернулось~

Спрячу под кат, чтобы сильно не позориться : D На самом деле, я попыталась вложить все свои чувства и эмоции в этот текст, тут действительно честное мнение об этом месте, как, сначала, мы думали, что мы здесь не проживем три месяца, что изолированная деревня - это конец, и как все пришло к тому, что это место стало моим японским домом, и я безумно люблю всех этих людей

"Ничто в этом мире не бывает случайным"

Мнение на английском :3

Hajimemashite~ My name is Ksenia, but here everyone is calling me きっちゃん, 23 years old. I am from Russia, Moscow, where I attended Lomonosov Moscow State University and did my bachelor's in ‘British/ Italian/ Russian studies’. So, right now, I am a teacher of Russian and Italian languages especially for kids. I really like kids, but they are a lot of work, so I am working hard to do my best.

I always had an interest in Japan, Japanese culture and Japanese language so at least I wanted to visit my beloved country. I really like to help people, so I searched any volunteer projects through the Internet and found some very interesting. I chose project in Samegawa-mura because I wanted to help with children camps and took part in children general education through intercultural communication. I believe that learning a foreign language and learning about foreign culture in early age can by useful for general intellectual development and can help to become a broad-minded person.

Of course, when Yasu-san, the representative of NICE, told me that it’s Fukushima prefecture, I was afraid, but soon I’ve changed my mind. I really want to help people from all Fukushima prefecture to change opinion about this part of Japan. People from Fukushima suffers more from the rumors and gossip that this place is crazily dangerous and you should not go there, buy their products and etc. But it's not true: every day they wake up and go to work, their children are having fun with during the camps. Life goes on, and this is all what we need to know about Fukushima. I wish Fukushima will soon recover from all these gossip. I am writing my own blog in Russian language, so, through it many people already knew that Fukushima isn't dangerous place at all! :3

First, when we came to Samegawa-mura with my friend Saya (she is from Kazachstan), we were really surprised that this place is so isolated mountain village. There aren't any convenience store or post office, no places to go, only untouched nature and rice fields. We're all in complete shock. I've never stayed in such isolated village before, never lived in an american trailer or taken a shower with other people. But soon I realized, that nothing in this world happens by chance, so I have to get this 3 moths challenge with smile! :3

Cause already passed two month, I have a lot of interesting to tell u! :3

The most important thing here that Abukuma is one big family. Everyone helps each other, the main slogan of Abukuma: "Let's go forwards by working together!". In the beginning we started to work in the garden. Ponta-san taught me that working in the garden has other, less spiritual rewards. In addition to being a source of fresh, healthy produce, gardening can ease stress, keep you limber, and even improve your mood. After two weeks I really started to love working in the garden.

They also run lodging facilities on-site that can be reserved by the general public. Lodging is offered in combination with experiences such as making handmade udon and making pizza in a wood-fired oven. It's very interesting experience. People r coming from different cities, we r working together on the rice fields and then go to onsen! :3 Here I first played the すいか game. And it was soooo breathtaking!

Then we had non-stop series of camps for children. It was hard, but, in the same time, very interesting. This month taught me that despite all the difficulties, it is necessary to meet each day with smile. With smile u can do everything!

Sometimes, when I didn't understand children, I sit with them and hold their hands. Sometimes worlds are never necessary, all we need to do is smile, love and understand each other at a soul level. My experience is that it really is that simple, and it works! During these camps I started to notice a low rumbling sound. And I realized that there's a fire starting in my heart <3

In conclusion, this place has changed me a lot since I got here: I started to love nature and care about it; here I met so many friends; right now this place became my japanese house where my beloved family is waiting for me. Abukuma is the best place on earth. If everyone could attend this camp, the world would be a much happier place. Nowhere else can a person gain an appreciation for nature and life. If you want to change your life, you have to come here, and your life will change forever! So, please, come here! Thank you for ur attention, see u~ きっちゃん


Надеюсь, Вы еще не устали от моих переводов :3 Всех обнимаю

@темы: Japan, 鮫川, 日本, 私

Comments

[Лина_]

здорово!!!!!!!

[Ryu-O]

Ёр инглиш из фантастик)))

[[Sakuragi_Luka]]

Хвостатая_, спасибо :3

Ryu-O, че, правда? по мне я на уровне 5 классника пишу : D

[Ryu-O]

[Sakuragi_Luka], да ну, брось, ты слишком самокритична.) Все очень даже

[[Sakuragi_Luka]]

Ryu-O, спасибо

это да, проблемы с самокритикой у меня есть)))

[Tish Evans]

так, ошибки есть, но сейчас у меня нет времени подробно всё расписать, поэтому завтра.

[[Sakuragi_Luka]]

Tish Evans, спасибо)

[Tish Evans]

Итак, поехали *поправила очки*

So, right now, I am a teacher of Russian and Italian languages especially for kids.
запятую после right now не надо
а вот перед especially как раз надо) это уточнение

but they are a lot of work
конструкция не очень. лучше сказать что-то вроде "Они требуют много времени", т.е. they demand a lot of work to be done или you need to work much more when you teach kids. что-то в этом духе.

I always had an interest in Japan, Japanese culture and Japanese language so at least I wanted to visit my beloved country.
to have an interest звучит как-то м... как это по-русски? ну, что у тебя в этом деле свой интерес, своя выгода какая-то) лучше сказать I was always interested.
перед so запятая нужна
at least имеет значение "по крайней мере, хотя бы". я понимаю, что ты хотела сказать, что для начала, по крайней мере, ты хотела бы посетить эту страну. но в английском в таком контексте эта фраза не употребляется, британцы бы не поняли, что ты хочешь сказать. лучше просто so I wanted to visit...

I really like to help people, so I searched any volunteer projects through the Internet and found some very interesting.
like helping people, здесь нужен герундий
searched for
some volunteer projects (any используется в вопросительных и отрицательных предложениях)
on the Internet или via Internet (through - типичная ошибка носителя русского языка)
some very interesting ones (не теряй существительное, это не русский; если не хочешь ещё раз использовать само существительное, замени его на обезличенное)

I chose project in Samegawa-mura...
лучше I have chosen. не могу толком объяснить, почему, но просто так будет звучать более по-английски.

from all Fukushima prefecture
так не говорят. понимаю, что ты хотела сказать "из всей префектуры Фукушима", но нет, в английском такой номер не пройдёт. или from the rest of Fukushima prefecture или from all over the Fukushima prefecture. (хотя насчёт второго варианта не уверена)

People from Fukushima suffers more from the rumors and gossip that this place is crazily dangerous and you should not go there, buy their products and etc.
форму глагола to suffer посмотри, ты там неправильное число поставила
если есть more, то должно быть и than. иначе меняй на a lot, например.
the не надо после from
лучше не that, а about this place being crazily...
итого: from rumors and gossips about this place being crazily dangerous, not worth going there, buying their products, etc.

But it's not true: every day they wake up and go to work, their children are having fun with during the camps.
with-то откуда взялось?
и лучше не during the camps, a in the camps

I wish Fukushima will soon recover from all these gossip.
с wish всегда идёт прошедшее: I wish Fukushima would soon recover from all these rumors.

I am writing my own blog in Russian language, so, through it many people already knew that Fukushima isn't dangerous place at all! :3
лучше I have my own blog (иначе получается, что ты пишешь вот прям щас про Фукушиму, а ты же пишешь туда в общем)
запятая после through it
already knоw
a dangerous place

that this place is so isolated mountain village
или просто is so isolated, или is such an isolated mountain village.

There aren't any convenience store or post office
или во множественное число существительные поставь, или глагол в единственное

only untouched nature
лучше just untapped nature, потому что в данном контексте only не подходит, а untouched имеет более прямое значение, нежели untapped. а ещё можно virgin употребить.

We're all in complete shock.
are или were? were, как правило, не сокращается.
complete убери. шок он и есть шок (по крайней мере, в английском языке).
и вообще лучше We were shocked.

so I have to get this 3 moths challenge with smile!
to take или to accept
with a smile

Cause already passed two month, I have a lot of interesting to tell u! :3
'Cause two months have already passed, and I have a lot of interesting things to tell you about!

The most important thing here that Abukuma is one big family.
смысловой глагол to be куда потеряла? вставь его между here и that.

Everyone helps each other, the main slogan of Abukuma: "Let's go forwards by working together!".
лучше They help each other.
и вообще лучше переписать всё предложение вот так:
They always help each other; their slogan is "Let's walk on by working together!"
и никакой точки в конце по правилам английской пунктуации!

In the beginning we started to work in the garden
запятая после In the beginning
а лучше We began with working in the garden.

After two weeks I really started to love working in the garden.
запятая после After two weeks
started loving, потому что ты же всё ещё это любишь

It's very interesting experience.
артикль потеряла

People r coming from different cities, we r working together on the rice fields and then go to onsen!
не надо r, пиши полную форму, там всего-то 3 буквы! такие сокращения допустимы в текстовых сообщениях, но никак не в отзывах и нормальных текстах.
лучше: People are coming from different cities; we work together on the rice fields and then go to onsen!

It was hard, but, in the same time, very interesting
at the same time

This month taught me that despite all the difficulties, it is necessary to meet each day with smile.
запятая после that
with a smile

With smile u can do everything!
With a smile, you can do everything!

Sometimes, when I didn't understand children, I sit with them and hold their hands.
опять не так с согласованием времён. или всё в настоящем, или всё в прошедшем.

Sometimes worlds are never necessary, all we need to do is smile, love and understand each other at a soul level.
worlds? не words?
are not necessary
; вместо ,
is to smile или to keep smiling
at a soul level не звучит. понимаю, что ты хотела сказать, но нет такого прилагательного. поэтому или emotional, или spiritual.
at the spiritual level или on a spiritual level

My experience is that it really is that simple, and it works!
My experience has showed that it is really that simple

During these camps I started to notice a low rumbling sound.
started noticing

And I realized that there's a fire starting in my heart <3
I've realized
it's (потому что мы говорим о конкретном явлении, на которое ты указала в предыдущем предложении)

In conclusion, this place has changed me a lot since I got here: I started to love nature and care about it; here I met so many friends; right now this place became my japanese house where my beloved family is waiting for me.
лучше добавить I'd love to say that после In conclusion,
started loving nature and worrying about it
I've met (потому что ты всё ещё там)
right now не нужно, оно не несёт никакой смысловой нагрузки
this place has become
my Japanese home

If everyone could attend this camp, the world would be a much happier place.
would become

Thank you for ur attention, see u
your
see you? в отзывах в конце не стоит такое писать) хотя бы потому что ты даже не знаешь этих людей и уж точно не увидишь их. see you - можно написать в конце письма другу, которого уже когда-то встречал, например.

[[Sakuragi_Luka]]

Tish Evans, спасибо, дорогая!!! все исправлю!))

[Tish Evans]

[Sakuragi_Luka], да не за что